See,Santa Claus showed up and gave me a present earlier this year.I got the result yesterday and I passed my E-Test.Thanks all the prays and wishes from all my friends and family.This helps my confident a little bit.Actually,That Santa Claus is one of my teachers called Mark.He is a wonderful teacher and helps me a lot.However,I went to bed for celebration instead of having a big dish.The weakest part of my English remain at writing.Fortunately for me,I got the minimum at this part.
Dec 14, 2007
Yes! I passed my E-Test
See,Santa Claus showed up and gave me a present earlier this year.I got the result yesterday and I passed my E-Test.Thanks all the prays and wishes from all my friends and family.This helps my confident a little bit.Actually,That Santa Claus is one of my teachers called Mark.He is a wonderful teacher and helps me a lot.However,I went to bed for celebration instead of having a big dish.The weakest part of my English remain at writing.Fortunately for me,I got the minimum at this part.
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Congratulate you!!
Merry Christmas
thanks a lot.I am very appreciated at that.
Congratulations!
I always thought your English was pretty good. We never ran into any major communication problems.
really?Jon.I though We couldn't understand each other when We talked on the phone first time.Ha!Thanks for your word.
By the way,Jon.Would you please help me correct errors from my post if you see them and have free time for that?One more thing,please tell me your blog.
People don't normally like having their errors corrected, so it's not something I generally like to do. But if you want me to, I will. I've noticed that you have problems with past-tense (something that happened in the past). For example, the title of this post should be "I passed my E-Test" because you passed it in the past (2 days ago). "Pass" on its own means that is is the present tense - that you are passing it right this second. And it should be "Santa Claus showed up" because it happened in the past.
Another thing is that sometimes you miss out words in the middle. You get the key words of the sentence in place but you miss out little words like "a" and "for" that connect them together. For example, it should be "Santa Claus showed up and gave me a present earlier this year" (note the "a" in the middle). This is just to connect the two words together.
Finally, sometimes you have problems with plurals (multiple items of something). For example, it should be "Santa Claus is one of my teachers" (note the "s" on the end) because you have more than one teacher.
Those are the only things I've noticed. I have no trouble understanding what you are saying though.
P.S. I don't have a personal blog. I only have my company one but I don't really post anything about myself. It's http://www.digitalrebellion.com/blog.php?blog=1
Jon,Thanks a lot.I am appreciated at your correction.I am the person would like to know my mistakes.Please do that as often as you can if you have time for that.You are right on the money.It seems I have troubles on past tense/single or plural.
By the way,I like the design of your company website.
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